Tuesday, March 24, 2009 8:19 PM
Hey guys,
Ash here..just to inform all of you that the Inter Class soccer team got 3rd place!!!! We tied with 2N3 with 14 points.
The champion is 2T1!! Claps for them! Then second place is 2N2! Claps for them too!!
We won 6 out of 8 matches and we only lost to 2T1 and 2N3. The other teams were closely fought and we prevailed in the end! Now presenting our players....
Keeper: Fakhruz!
Defence: Israfael and Boon Kiat!!
Midfield: Chuan Zhi!
Attack: Afiq and Ash!!
Subs: Victor and Alin!!
Clap Clap Clap~~!!
We did our part by playing in the competition but did you guys do your part by even coming down and supporting us? Where were you when we needed you the most when we were feeling down after 2 straight losses? Where? Victor and Alin came down just when we needed them. Israfael rushed from the hospital to play? So yea? Class Spirit? I don't think so...
Tuesday, March 17, 2009 11:50 PM
Lovelies, do update the homework column if there's any more homework to be updated on yah. (: And, do remember the change the last updated date if there's any updates to be made please. (: Thanks a lot. (:
So how if everyone's march holidays so far? I hope it going well for everyone. (: I will love to have everyone to write how's your march holidays in the blog post even if it's just a short one yah! (: Haha. But, it will be okay if you don't want to write. (: I think I will be getting everyone to tell me how's march holidays and update them in blog. So, I hope all of you all will cooperate and instead of just telling me, 'bored', add in some more comments like, 'boring because couldn't go out' or blahblah. (: Will appreciate that a lot! (: Haha.
Goodnight, lovelies.
Loves,
Yanfang.
9:45 AM
Alright, got this information from Ms Zuraida's blog. Please remember to refer and do your english homework. (: Plus, your mindmap with the composition attached. (:
Choose one of the following titles:
1) A Day Out With My Idol
2) My Experience of Being Trapped In A Coca-Cola Can
3) The Day When There Was No Sun
4) The Day I Was Floating Around In a Bubble
5) My Experience of Being A Character In An Electronic Game
How To Write A Descriptive Essay
More than many other types of essays, descriptive essays strive to create a deeply involved and vivid experience for the reader. Great descriptive essays achieve this affect by using detailed observations and descriptions.When writing a descriptive essay, you often have a particular reason for writing your description.
Example: Imagine that you want to write a descriptive essay about your grandfather. You've chosen to write about your grandfather's physical appearance and the way that he interacts with people. However, rather than providing a general description of these aspects, you want to convey your admiration for his strength and kindness. This is your reason for writing the descriptive essay.
To achieve this, you might focus one of your paragraphs on describing the roughness of his hands, roughness resulting from the labor of his work throughout his life, but you might also describe how he would hold your hands so gently with his rough hands when having a conversation with you or when taking a walk.As you write your descriptive essay, the best way to create a vivid experience for your readers is to focus on the five senses.sightsoundsmelltouchtasteWhen you focus your descriptions on the senses, you provide vivid and specific details that show your readers rather than tell your readers what you are describing.
Planning your descriptive essay:
What or who do you want to describe?
What is your reason for writing your description?
What are the particular qualities that you want to focus on?
Drafting your descriptive essay:
What sights, sounds, smells, tastes, and textures are important for developing your description?Which details can you include to ensure that your readers gain a vivid impression imbued with your emotion or perspective?
Revising your descriptive essay:
Have you provided enough details and descriptions to enable your readers to gain a complete and vivid perception?
Have you left out any minor but important details?
Have you used words that convey your emotion or perspective?
Are there any unnecessary details in your description?
Does each paragraph of your essay focus on one aspect of your description?
Are you paragraphs ordered in the most affective way?(Source: Modified from http://www.writeexpress.com/descriptive-essay.html)
Further Instructions and tips:
1) Write a 350 to 550 word essay.
2) Plan first before you write, therefore I would like to see a mind map attached to every essay. As usual, marks will also be awarded for every mind map.
3) Use PAST TENSES throughout your essay.
4) Avoid ending your essay by saying, "...it was just a dream" ----This is such an anti-climax.
5) End your essay with a reflective note; explain what you have learnt from the experience.
6) Remember, this is NOT A NARRATIVE ESSAY. Therefore, the focus is on your observations and NOT STORY LINE. To be more specific, your essay should consists 70% descriptions and 30% story.
7) Any other queries, feel free to ask me.
Goodluck everyone. (:
Loves,
Yanfang.
Monday, March 16, 2009 7:08 PM
Yo lovelies!
And to all the readers out there, we are back from Sec 2 OLE camp like 2 weeks ago? Haha. :X. Didn't have the chance to post about it.
Anyway shall not go into details. But I need photos so probably getting from teachers since our phones were taken away. ): Which also means no photos actually, if you can't see the link.
Okay, just a little post to comment about the camp. (:
I believe all of us didn't escape from mosquito bites. At least, got one lah right? Haha. But I'm also quite sure everyone have fun. (: From everyone happy faces despite some of us cried after quarrells during the camp. But quarrells just made us more stronger, more treasure each other more right. (:
We were supposed to prepare a performance for campfire. Although, we might not be the best, but I believe everyone have put in their best. We had so much time to prepare but in the end, only the last 40 min we started to really panic and think of something to perform. This shows, we got to learn how to manage time yah though in the end, like what instructor elaine said, we still manage to put up a wonderful performance but then, it isn't always as lucky as this time round right. (:
During the preparation of campfire performance, we all did quarrell. Shouted at each other and blahblah. Some of us cried after the quarrells. But, if you stop and think for a while, in the end, we all gave in, forgive and forget again right? (: Comforts were given when quarrells happened, solutions were thought of which were good. Not all of our ideas were all taken but we were able to give in and cooperate with each other. Here I want to thank the whole class as well, for being so cooperative and willing to give in when we were discussing about the campfire performance and all those lovely ideas. (: Every idea, is very lovely. (:
Here, I also want to take the chance to thank the two motivational and wonderful instructors - Instructor Elaine and Instrutor Yuhui! (: You two rocks yah! (:
We all had fun in the games and stuff. I believe we have built a trust in all of us somehow through the games. (:
I want to thank all the 2E3 lovelies for being hyper, for being so lovely, for cheering, for making my sec 2 OLE camp such a interesting one. (:
Anyway, just the summary we did for the 4 days 3 nights camp. (:
First day - Assembly in school. Then, went to Jalan Bahtera Adventure Centre by bus. (:
Settled in our huts then dressed in long pants. Went to assemble. Had
ice-breaker games before we thought of group names. Which were 'nerdy'
and 'blackroses' if I'm not wrong yah. (: Then, went for lunch. After that,
had low elements course games before dinner. After dinner, had night activities
which was the 'blindman trail' or something before lights off.
Second day - Woke up. Wash-ed up. Morning exercise. Then, had breakfast-ed before
we went to continue with some low elements course. Was supposed to have
kayaking but in the end, it rained. So it was canceled. ): Had outdoor cooking.
Then, had night activites which was 'Kidnap'. Lights off.
Third day - Woke up, wash-ed up, and morning exercise before breakfast. Had high elements
course, lunch-ed and prepared for campfire. Then, it rain-ed when we were having
dinner. ): So changed to indoor campfire. (: But, it was still very fun. And everyone
had a lot of fun cheering. (: And, every class performance were great! (: So was ours.
Fantastic. At night, the two lovely instructors talked to us. And I guess, all of us
were somehow touched. And, feeling sad a bit right. Haha. Had wash up, some had
supper then lights off.
Fourth day - Last day. Breakfast-ed. Last breakfast-ed. We got morning breakfast duty. (:
Haha. Quite fun right! Haha. Then, followed by area cleaning which was
the canteen. Then, free time for a while, assembled and helped cleared up
the parade square or something then waited for bus. Took bus and went back to
school. & that marks the end of the camp. ):
So, we are back to our school life right now, with the pile of books and homework which we can never forget. Haha. :X. I guess all of us have plenty of fun during the camp right. Now, it's time to tidy up our mood, and get back to studies mood. Haha.
But, not forgetting, now is march holidays! (: *Cheers. Do remember to take care of yoursleves and have fun but do not forget holiday homework too alright! Haha.
Smile always. (:
Loves,
Yanfang.
Friday, March 6, 2009 8:33 PM
oK...my name's brian.
ole 2 is coming up!
yay, camp time
it;s a long since anyone posted.
maybe forgot the password/email or something.
and it's been a long time since i edited a photo.
so, here's a photo to trigger our sec 1 camp memories. the original and my poorly edited one.
:( happy face.
btw, i welcome requests if you want the 40+ class pics that there are.
just post ur email add on the tag board. i'll send u the pics in a 3 separate email.
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well c'ya guys on sunday!:) sad face